Thal haiku/poem check it out:)

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Thal haiku/poem check it out:)
« on: December 07, 2007, 06:02:31 AM »
hi guys! i'm bored out of my mind..and have insomnia as usual..and i also got inspired by all the song posts..so i wanted to write a haiku/poem about thal....here goes..

T - together we stand
H - high hemoglobin is where it's at
A - all will be well if ya just appreciate
L - live like your bored, so you'll do everything
A - a red blood cell carries a thousand smiles
S - 'sea disease' is what thalassemia means in greek..cool!
S - so your gettin tired once in awhile.. you'll have an excuse to chill out
E - emmy award winning veins
M - maybe it's time to shorten the name of this disease
I - i suggest, beta..it's cool, it's hip, you'll be so popular!
A - a thal is already cool by nature
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Re: Thal haiku/poem check it out:)
« Reply #1 on: December 07, 2007, 03:49:01 PM »
Wow Red!

That's brilliant!

I love your creativity and can't wait to see your Desferal video/animation!
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Re: Thal haiku/poem check it out:)
« Reply #2 on: December 07, 2007, 08:56:42 PM »
Thanks Sajid! Means alot. :bighug

Hopefully i'll get them up and running soon! :thumbsup

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« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2007, 12:31:44 AM »
That is lovely red especially the ''m'' and the ''i''

you are so talented

Manal

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Re: Thal haiku/poem check it out:)
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2007, 12:58:38 AM »
thanks Manal!
your words of kindess always mean a great deal!
:blowkiss

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« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2007, 05:51:37 AM »
Great work red  :clap :clap :clap

ZAINI.
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Re: Thal haiku/poem check it out:)
« Reply #6 on: December 08, 2007, 10:05:51 PM »
Thanks Zaini! :flowers

 

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